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Post by vamp_blood Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:28 am

I can recall the day very well when you gave me your hand for the first time
The hand didn’t know me, still the hand came on to my hand.
I grabbed your hand ….. You know what?? I didn’t know you still I released my belief, my trust, my feelings towards you towards your hand
I could feel your hand a bit cold. Holding your hand we walked in a garden
Grabbed your hand hard while climbing on to the hill
I can recall, I couldn’t let your hand go even when you at the top of the hill
Asked your hand when we was about to step to a flying carpet
You were scared; I had to help you step by holding your hand
We travelled all our way to our dream island
The beautiful kiss that I can’t forget which helped a stair to appear
That stair took us into our hut…our forever hut….our safest destiny
The pure love we had was started by the touch of sun ray
The top of the ship where I put you ahead to get the world’s best pleasure
The setting sun…….
Flying birds towards home…….
The incredibly beautiful wave…….
The purest wind…….
You had all this pleasure where I was standing behind you grabbing your hand



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Post by Cinderella Thu Nov 27, 2008 7:28 am

Nice imagery . .
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Post by tears_of_cry Thu Nov 27, 2008 4:27 pm

nice vamp....  :lov3:
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Post by genie_in.a_bottle Thu Nov 27, 2008 7:33 pm

wow i like it your poem making me get illusion dancing :bravo:
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Post by sc0rpi0n Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:46 pm

nice nice lil boi  :lov3:
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Post by Mysterious_Stranger Wed Dec 10, 2008 8:21 pm

 :yupp: keep writing like this...
this is very nice!!!
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