A story never told

by **Nothingness** Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:56 pm

My dreamz got scattered,
My heart got blown.
For all that i have wished,
Seems like never to be known.
I am filled with hatred,
Burning in my own.
Wishing to be dead,
So this grave can be my home.
Alone on the edge again,
Stranded on a deserted stone.
Feeling all the pain inside,
But never letting out a moan.
Still look in around myself,
Thinking how my all fears have grown.
Once i was brave n bold,
Now i m scared of my own.

by msilmy Thu Jul 24, 2008 12:01 am

nothingness... Shocked

is this truth?... lol :p

This is the truth that finalizing life

Don't worry... you've more n more wonderful times...
go ahead...

I love the lines too :lov3:

But i'm not scared my own laughing

Keep it up dear

by **Nothingness** Thu Jul 24, 2008 12:06 am

Nah msilmy
Its not truth for me . laughing

But i like this poem.
Thanks for appreciation. Smile

by **Roma-_** Thu Jul 24, 2008 12:09 am

hey nice poem amy :lov3:

i didnt know u were a poet too laughing

by **Nothingness** Thu Jul 24, 2008 12:23 am

Yes i m

But this is not mine Neutral

by Guest Thu Jul 24, 2008 4:38 am

nothingness wrote:Yes i m
But this is not mine

lol...luna write a poem for me laughing

by the way...for whom who wrote this poem? Wink

by r0mz Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:16 am

heeheheheheheh realy nice man Very Happy

by anthromorphic Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:56 am

A brilliant piece of poetry..
And i must say that it looks quite anachronistic here.Lol
it reminds me of the poems of a great English Modern poet, T.S.Eliot...Esp his 'The Wasteland'..
His poems lack melody unlike other poetry yet the grating sounds produced by his words force you to take him extremely seriously.
Tips poem is written in his style but it still has melody.Only the way it communicates its underlying thought in such an effective way is amazing..
Read it carefully and you'd see that you just can't add or remove a single word from it or else it'd get destroyed..
Its intensity would never fail to touch ppl reading it.It was pure pleasure to see a poem of this calibre on a forum.Brilliant work Nothingness..
You have an excellent taste in poetry..Accept my deepest appreciation for this discovery.I've copied it.
Waiting for your next find to get posted in this space. Lol
great work